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Chow Chu

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Mar 7 07 4:25 PM

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I'm new, by the way, and here are two of my Pokemon:

Name: Essaimite [[Not really any meaning... Mite is from "Termite" which is a bug... I'd like to keep this name though, since that's what I've called it for the past year and a half...]]
Pokdex Type: PRAYMANTIS
Height, Weight: 3'9" and 98 lbs.
Element Type: Bug / Grass
Description: img265.imageshack.us/img2...itehv7.gif

Pokdex Data:
These large Pokemon love to travel in large groups. If they sense any danger, they will work together to stop whatever they fear. Until they evolve, they will remain together.

Evolution: Evolves into Zwermite at level 30
Special Ability: Swarm

Tackle...1
Double Team...6
Sludge Bomb...14
Leech Life...19
Silver Wind...27
Signal Beam...33
Acid...38
Solar Beam...45

Stats: Fast, not much of an attack. Defense is pretty high, if there are other Essaimite in your party.

Name: Zwermite [[see above]]
Pokedex type: PRAYMANTIS
Height and weight: 5'11" and 134 pounds.
Element type: Bug / Grass
Description: img218.imageshack.us/img2...itedm8.gif

Pokedex Data: Unlike its Pre-evolvtion, it is a leader. Whenever it sees a creature in need, it steps in and does its job. Unless a situation like this happens, Zwermite is a loner.
Evolution: Zwermite evolves from Essaimite at level 30
Special Ability: Technician
Attacks:

Razor Leaf... 36
Bite...42
Solar Beam...50

Same Stats

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Kingsirhc

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Mar 8 07 3:28 AM

hey see you joined then ^^
cool, you never posted Zwermite on the forum ^^

Chow Chu

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Mar 8 07 2:46 PM

This is Hosagi, right? xD

Why is my screen name "Chow Chu", when I made it "Icey Chan"? D:

Dark Caddisfly

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Mar 8 07 10:20 PM

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Hey! Welcome I hope you do enjoy you're stay at PF.

Your pokemon are original and nice sprites. I think that you should redo the attacks. Personally, I think you have too many offensive attacks and not enough defensive attacks. Teach it these moves in the following order. :

Essaimite:

Stringspit:---
Scratch:---
Leech Life:---
Leer: 6
Acid: 10
Fury Cutter: 16
Double Team: 20
Signal Beam: 26
Agility: 30
Swords Dance: 36
Slash: 40
Silver Wind: 46

Not to sound bossy, I think that you should leave out sludge bomb, but if you really must have it, I'd let it learn it after Agility.

There is a weapon called a Zweihander(check out the farfetch'd evo called Doubt'fowl in the community work)
So, maybe that can be apart of Zwemite's name

Zwemite:

Razor Leaf: 30
Bite: 34
False Swipe: 40
Swords Dance: 46
Slash: 50
Solarbeam: 56

I hope you like the movelist. You don't have to use it(I hope u do) But then again, when ShinE or another staff member checks over you're pokemon, they may ask u to make adjustments to the attacks or the pokemon. Anywho, this was just a suggestion to help u get started..

Chow Chu

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Mar 9 07 3:48 PM

No problem with changing the move list. My friend made the attack list, so it won't offend me. xD

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Darkwolf Cor

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Mar 18 07 12:36 PM

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To recapitulate...

ESSAIMITE
(Derivation of "Termite")
PRAYMANTIS POKMON
HT 39"
WT 98 lbs
Bug / Grass
Swarm Ability

Three-foot-nine isnt really big enough to call Essaimite a large Pokmon as denominated in the dex. Something that I was wondering is why this Pokmon weighs so much; its weight is disproportionate to its size, and Bug and Grass-Types tend to be light. In anycase, heres my suggested version of the dex.

ESSAIMITE love to travel in large
groups and cooperate with each
other; if they sense that something
----------------------------------
is wrong, they always solve the
problem together. These POKMON
separate only after they evolve.

Evolves into ZWERMITE at lvl 30.

-- STRING SHOT
-- SCRATCH
-- LEECH LIFE
06 LEER
10 ACID
16 FURY CUTTER
20 DOUBLE TEAM
26 SIGNAL BEAM
30 AGILITY
36 SWORDS DANCE
40 SLASH
46 SILVER WIND

Something that caught my attention is you mentioning that Essaimites DEF increases when there are other Essaimite in the trainers party. The only way to make this work would be to turn it into a new ability--something like this:

PROTECTOR
- If there are other non-KOed POKMON of the same evolutionary line as this POKMON in the TRAINERs party, this POKMONs DEF increases by 1 level when it enters battle.

Of course, if you wanted to use it youd have to ditch Swarm for it, since it doesnt make much sense for only some Essaimite to be protective of their comrades. Nevertheless, its your choice.

Moving on to Zwermite.

ZWERMITE
(Zweihander + Termite)
PRAYMANTIS POKMON
HT 511"
WT 134 lbs
Bug / Grass
Technician (JP Name) Ability

I should mention that if you want to go with the Protector ability, you should probably give it to Zwermite as well, since it is still a very protective Pokmon.

Just a bit of extra-lengthy wording to make your dex fit the character minimum:

Unlike its pre-evolved form, ZWER-
MITE is a leader. Whenever it sees
that any creature is in danger, it will
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step in and help. When its assistance
isnt needed, however, ZWERMITE is
a very solitary POKMON.

Evolves from ESSAIMITE at lvl 30.

-- STRING SHOT
-- SCRATCH
-- LEECH LIFE
-- LEER
-- ACID
-- FURY CUTTER
-- DOUBLE TEAM
-- SIGNAL BEAM
30 RAZOR LEAF
34 BITE
40 FALSE SWIPE
46 SWORDS DANCE
50 SLASH
56 SOLARBEAM

So aside from the things Ive pointed out, all looks fine. Nice Pokmon, by the way.

Chow Chu

that's all fine.

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Mar 19 07 10:16 AM

Thanks. ^.^ Everything you said is fine with me.

Darkwolf Cor

Re: that's all fine.

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Mar 19 07 2:05 PM

Pokémon Factory Worker

So, just for the sake of clarity, youre okay with replacing the Swarm ability with Protector?

Chow Chu

Re: that's all fine.

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Mar 20 07 11:57 AM

Yes, I'm okay with it, everything is fine. ^.^

My mind iseasy to change. hehe.

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