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Nov 16 02 9:43 AM

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Ah, I have three new suggestions.

Firmole: Earth/Fire
Vent Pokmon.
Length: 3' 2", Weight: 50 lbs.

Hides in the earth for most of its life, but comes out when attacked.

Geuysor: Fire/Earth
Steamjet Pokmon.
Length: 4' 9", Weight: 127 lbs.

Incappable of movment, it stays stationary after realesed from it's Pokball.

Volcanus: Fire/Earth
Erruption Pokmon.
Length: 7' 1", Weight: 501 lbs.

A giant creature, composed mostly of dirt. Has a nasty temper, and will spit fire at will.

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Um...anyone?

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Nov 16 02 4:39 PM

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Im sorry if I forgot anything, but can someone comment?

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Nov 16 02 11:16 PM

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You're aware that you didn't provide descriptions for any of these?

Here's how your dexes look in standard format.

 Hides in the earthfor most of itslife, but comes------------------out when attacked.Incapable ofmovement, itstays stationary------------------after beingreleased fromits POK BALL.A giant creature,composed mostly ofdirt. Has a nasty------------------temper, andwill spit fireat will.

The first is too short. The others are rather short as well, but at least can be stretched to six lines.

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Indeed.

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Nov 17 02 2:49 PM

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Ah sorry. Ok, ofr firmole, lets try

Hides in the earth
for most of its
life, but comes
------------------
out when attacked.
Holds large amounts
of lava inside.

And for the descriptions, Firmole, small brown bump, surronded by dirt, with a hole in the thope of mound, and to black eyes, with those white spots.
Gueysor, Larger hill, with a hole in nthe top, with steam coming out of it. Smug mouth, and same eyes.
Volcanus, is a even larger mound, and a mustache and angered mouth, seemed to be carved out of the rock.

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 Hides in the earthfor most of itslife, but comes------------------out when attacked.Holds large amountsof lava inside.

That fifth line doesn't quite fit. I've rephrased it here to work.

 Hides in the earthfor most of itslife, but comes------------------out when attacked.It contains largeamounts of lava.

The descriptions work, but they do prompt one question: Why are Gueysor and Volcanus Fire/Ground instead of Ground/Fire? They're still mounds of earth, or rock in Volcanus' case; changing them from Firmole's Ground/Fire implies an increase in their Fire aspect.