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Dr Nog

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Dec 21 09 3:36 PM

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im bored, so we are going to start a story, i will type the intro and you reply what happens next

Intro: A Short 13 year old boy is just sitting at home playing games when he hears a loud bang.

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Dec 22 09 1:15 PM

PF Executive

Wondering what is going on, he rushes to his room's window and sees a metal crate standing before the front door.

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Dec 22 09 1:18 PM

He goes to the front door, opens it, and sees that the metal crate has a tag on it, which reads "Curiosity" in fancy writing on one side. Flipping it, he finds scrawled in red ink "Killed the cat" on the other side.

My Team:

Exo (Xoskilitn)
Blaze
Male
Fire
Lv. 13
Tech: Scratch, Leer, Ember, Poison Sting

Raven (Nevermore)
Keen Eye
Female
Dark/ Flying
Lv. 8
Tech: Tackle, Growl, Leer, Pursuit

Molly (Nidoran (F))
Poison Point
Poison
Lv. 7
Tech: Growl, Scratch, Tail Whip

Jack (Plumpkin [SHINY])
Chlorophyll
Male
Grass
Lv. 5
Tech: Tackle, Leer, Tickle

Vayne (Nutreed)
Overgrow
Male
Grass
Level 5
Attacks: Life Pulse, Defense Curl

Alecto (Tiquail)
Hustle
Female
Normal/Flying
Level 5
Attacks: Tackle, Sand Attack

elementalpenguin

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Dec 22 09 1:20 PM

Pokémon Factory Worker

Heedless of this quite obvious warning, the boy opens the box.

RPG
Crys: Chrysice lvl 10, female
Powder Snow
Supersonic

Harden

Sargon: Nidoran Male, lvl 8
Leer
Peck

PARTNERS: Xer0 (Romulus)

Last Edited By: elementalpenguin Dec 23 09 12:17 AM. Edited 1 times.

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Dec 22 09 1:57 PM

Instantly, he is sucked in. Falling... Falling... in some endless white place, he hears a thud and is knocked unconscious.

Award for Extreme Patience
Always hotter than the competition. I got the award for Braving the Marquee of Doom!

Dr Nog

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Dec 22 09 2:10 PM

when he awakes 2 men are carrying him through a palace and he has chains on him

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Dec 22 09 2:20 PM

He suddenly realizes that he knows kung fu and strangles both guards with his chains.

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Dr Nog

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Dec 22 09 7:38 PM

ZeldaFan wrote:
He suddenly realizes that he knows kung fu and strangles both guards with his chains.

nice plot twist,

but then more guards come and attack him. When he wakes again he is in the throne room and he hears a conversation.

Guard 1 "We found this one in the courtyard Your highness"

Guard 2"He was bothering the princesses"

King "Bring him here"

The guards bring him up and the boy looks up at him

King "Whats your name'

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Dec 22 09 10:26 PM

"It's... uhhh... uhhh.... I forgot, your highness." the boy replied. "What do you mean, you forgot your name? Are you playing with me?" said the King.
"No, your highness. I can't remember my name."
"Hmm... very well then... guards! Throw him in the dungeon until he remembers his name!"
"Yes your highness," The guards said. They carried him off to the dungeon.

(The next post will continue in the dungeon, please)

Award for Extreme Patience
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Dr Nog

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Dec 23 09 11:37 AM

when They arrived in the dungeon they threw him in a cell with a mysterious looking man, "what are you in for" Asked the man

Boy: "I can't remember my name"

Man: "i tried stealing from the treasury"
"where do you come from anyways"

Boy "I can't seem to remember that either, all i remember is opening a box then everything went black"
"Whats your name"

Man: "Tormund"
Did your name start with a B, perhaps a C, D, E?"

Boy: "Ah yes i remember now, my name is Ellis

Man:"odd name for a boy"

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Dec 26 09 9:03 AM

Man: "Well, Ellis, would you like to know a secret?"

Ellis: "Sure..."
Man: <.< >.> "I have a way out of here!"

The man hobbles over to a wall and pushes a stone in. A door opens, and a passage extends deep below the castle. An eerie red glow seems to come from further in.

My Team:

Exo (Xoskilitn)
Blaze
Male
Fire
Lv. 13
Tech: Scratch, Leer, Ember, Poison Sting

Raven (Nevermore)
Keen Eye
Female
Dark/ Flying
Lv. 8
Tech: Tackle, Growl, Leer, Pursuit

Molly (Nidoran (F))
Poison Point
Poison
Lv. 7
Tech: Growl, Scratch, Tail Whip

Jack (Plumpkin [SHINY])
Chlorophyll
Male
Grass
Lv. 5
Tech: Tackle, Leer, Tickle

Vayne (Nutreed)
Overgrow
Male
Grass
Level 5
Attacks: Life Pulse, Defense Curl

Alecto (Tiquail)
Hustle
Female
Normal/Flying
Level 5
Attacks: Tackle, Sand Attack

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Dec 26 09 1:53 PM

Ellis looked at the passage. "I go down here?" he asked. Tormund nodded. "Well... can you come with me?"
"No."
"Why not?"
"I've been here to long. They'd know if I was gone."
"Oh, okay."
And so, Ellis went into the passage. The door closed behind him, and locked. The dim red glow from below (that rhymed!) was the only source of light now.

Award for Extreme Patience
Always hotter than the competition. I got the award for Braving the Marquee of Doom!

JDLJDL

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Dec 26 09 8:28 PM

The boy walked in, and he then realized that the red glow was... LAVA!
"You have walked right into my trap! I shall now attack you with my Ninja Mutant Sonic Vampire Clone Robots!" shouted the King over the intercom.

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PielordDx

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Dec 26 09 8:41 PM

Ellis used his ninja skills to jump over the lava - using the heads of whatever JDL said. "NOOO!" the King yelled.

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Dec 26 09 9:41 PM

Ellis jolted awake. It had been a... very strange dream. Instead of in a cell with an old man, or in a room with lava and ninja-monkey-clone-whosits, he was sitting in a white padded room. In the center of the room was a glass bottle with red liquid inside. On it was a tag, which had writing on both sides. On one, in gold ink, was written "Drink me...", and on the other side, in silver ink, was written "or not."

My Team:

Exo (Xoskilitn)
Blaze
Male
Fire
Lv. 13
Tech: Scratch, Leer, Ember, Poison Sting

Raven (Nevermore)
Keen Eye
Female
Dark/ Flying
Lv. 8
Tech: Tackle, Growl, Leer, Pursuit

Molly (Nidoran (F))
Poison Point
Poison
Lv. 7
Tech: Growl, Scratch, Tail Whip

Jack (Plumpkin [SHINY])
Chlorophyll
Male
Grass
Lv. 5
Tech: Tackle, Leer, Tickle

Vayne (Nutreed)
Overgrow
Male
Grass
Level 5
Attacks: Life Pulse, Defense Curl

Alecto (Tiquail)
Hustle
Female
Normal/Flying
Level 5
Attacks: Tackle, Sand Attack

Last Edited By: sovereignofsilence667 Dec 26 09 9:47 PM. Edited 2 times.

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Dec 26 09 9:50 PM

Ellis decided that he would drink it since gold is so much more valuable than silver so it wins. He drank the potion befor he knew it, the bottle and the padding in the room were growing bigger. And bigger, and bigger. After everything stopped growing, he noticed a teeny tiny hole in the padding.

Who can guess what I just referenced?

Award for Extreme Patience
Always hotter than the competition. I got the award for Braving the Marquee of Doom!

sovereignofsilence667

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Dec 26 09 10:13 PM

(You mean WE, Flarsy. I started the Alice in Wonderland reference!)

Ellis wandered through the hole in the pad, and found himself in an old city with many skyscrapers and asphalt roads. He wandered over to the edge of one road, and found himself looking into a yawning chasm. "Whoa! This place is freaky..." he said. A large neon sign on one building read Everyone's an oyster; a hidden gem on the inside... Everyone's also a winner at the Hearts Casino! Come on and live a little; you can be a winner, too!

My Team:

Exo (Xoskilitn)
Blaze
Male
Fire
Lv. 13
Tech: Scratch, Leer, Ember, Poison Sting

Raven (Nevermore)
Keen Eye
Female
Dark/ Flying
Lv. 8
Tech: Tackle, Growl, Leer, Pursuit

Molly (Nidoran (F))
Poison Point
Poison
Lv. 7
Tech: Growl, Scratch, Tail Whip

Jack (Plumpkin [SHINY])
Chlorophyll
Male
Grass
Lv. 5
Tech: Tackle, Leer, Tickle

Vayne (Nutreed)
Overgrow
Male
Grass
Level 5
Attacks: Life Pulse, Defense Curl

Alecto (Tiquail)
Hustle
Female
Normal/Flying
Level 5
Attacks: Tackle, Sand Attack

PielordDx

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Dec 26 09 11:52 PM

(Ellis in Wunderland!)
He found a donut that said "PLEASE,FOR THE LOVE OF CHRIST! EAT ME!. So he did.

Dr Nog

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Dec 27 09 5:46 PM

a shady looking man comes up to him and gives him a metal crate, that says "I told you so" referencing the crate from before

Ellis: "well things cant get much worse" He opens the crate,

in this one he finds a syringe with a red liquid in it that has a label that reads "Desperate times", A wrench, and some kind of odd looking shoes in a backpack, he puts the shot in the backpack unsure what it does, clips the wrench to his belt and put on the shoes

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Dec 28 09 7:45 PM

Looking down the corrider, he knew it was very-very long. So, he started walking. But in no time he had cleared the tunnel. He wondered why it was so short when he didn't see any light for a mile before. He looked back but the cave was gone. He was surrounded by a never ending (or is it) field of grass and flowers on a hilly terrain.

Award for Extreme Patience
Always hotter than the competition. I got the award for Braving the Marquee of Doom!

sovereignofsilence667

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Dec 28 09 11:03 PM

Ellis wandered through the field, when suddenly, he came upon a bunch of flowers.

Ellis: "Well, you know what they say; 'You cna learn a lot of things from the flowers!'"
???: "Naturally!"
Ellis: "Wha? Who...?"
???: "Down here, boy!"

Ellis looked down, and saw that it was a rather large rose that was speaking to him.

My Team:

Exo (Xoskilitn)
Blaze
Male
Fire
Lv. 13
Tech: Scratch, Leer, Ember, Poison Sting

Raven (Nevermore)
Keen Eye
Female
Dark/ Flying
Lv. 8
Tech: Tackle, Growl, Leer, Pursuit

Molly (Nidoran (F))
Poison Point
Poison
Lv. 7
Tech: Growl, Scratch, Tail Whip

Jack (Plumpkin [SHINY])
Chlorophyll
Male
Grass
Lv. 5
Tech: Tackle, Leer, Tickle

Vayne (Nutreed)
Overgrow
Male
Grass
Level 5
Attacks: Life Pulse, Defense Curl

Alecto (Tiquail)
Hustle
Female
Normal/Flying
Level 5
Attacks: Tackle, Sand Attack

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