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Zoroark

Ice phoenix pokemon

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Dec 12 11 4:55 AM

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Name: Iceflame

Classification: Ice Phoenix Pokemon

Type: Ice/flying

Ht: 10.5 Feet

Wt: 375 lb

Description: Almost like Atricuno except it wings look more frozen and the head more eagle-like.

-DEX A: When it dies it melts then it's reborn when it re-freezes.

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Rahjet

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Dec 12 11 9:00 AM

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You need to make the PKMN stand out from Articuno. If it's "Almost like Atricuno," then it's not a new PKMN. Also, Iceflame is not an acceptable name. It is too straightforward and very, very bland. Please try to come up with something more creative. On this note, what does the flame part have to do with anything if it is Ice/Flying-type? Also, to make this a complete suggestion, you need to include Ability, lengthen Dex A with more detail, create a Dex B, come up with a movelist, etc.

You know what, on second thought read this: http://pfsuggestionsboard.yuku.com/topic/3849/Suggesters-Here-s-Your-Template#.TuYy92NFu7s

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I thought I had explained this. Read the rules and use the template. Also, look at the RBY Archives for an idea of what not to do. Finally, you have two suggestions up already. As such, you can't have another one. Sorry if I sound a bit rude.

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dude, zoroark. first of all, this is, what, your SIXTH TIME posting an unacceptable submission? you NEED to actually PAY ATTENTION to what we're saying if you aren't just trying to troll us. second, i had zoroark as my pic before he was even english-ized. you can't just waltz in here and encroach on lightningrod's territory. or else i'll have murmette curse you, or something. (murmette is the only pokemon i have suggested, but i spent a lot of TIME and EFFORT and WORDS on her, um, it, and it was approved despite being a relative of a nintendo pokemon.)

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Lightning, don't use personal issues as an excuse to bag on his Pokemon, even if it is really bad. It makes you the only troll around here.

And now, constructive criticism. If you want an ice phoenix, then I suggest that you pull a Flygon and make it an Ice/Fire type with Levitate. A better name could be Phoenice (not that good, but way better than Iceflame) You haven't read the template, which you need to do if you ever want this to get approved, and again, if it's "Almost like Atricuno (spell it right)", then you couldn't have put much thought into and it becomes a total knockoff. You just took Articuno and made it reincarnate. You named it Iceflame without even putting any fire into it, and if you did it would just be a hybrid of Articuno and Moltres. Also, notice how they're both legendaries. Did you really expect this to be approved as a non-legendary?

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